second of all I love ur idea cuz it's really unique and is a cool way to look at peter pan
It's not a bad picture in itself, it just feels a bit... overly conservative to me personally. I mean, okay, I know this is from more conservative times - so "male-Wendy" having male clothes is the only thing I can give you here as being fitting, given the context.
And Tinker bell! It's amazing!!
I already liked it, when I saw it first time, and now I searched for it to put it to my favourites...
Lovin this <3
ship so hard <3